Friday, October 10, 2008

Change

If i could change one thing in the book i would change the fact that monster gets locked up at the for beating up that under cover cop. i would want to change this because he was becoming religious like he had stopped gang bangin and he got married and was trying to turn his life around and the only reason that he beat up that under cover cop is because he was acting like he was a drug dealer and monster asked him to get off his block but he didnt and so he beat up cause he didnt want that kinda of stuff around his kids. i think that it would have made the book better because it would have proved that he was really tryin and that things have started to go alot better for him.

3 comments:

Mr.Treadway said...

so monster got put in jail for doin somthin good aint tht how lif is though

D anator said...

I feel where you are comeing from some people want to turn thei life around but some other people just won't stop comeing after you

J. Pingrey said...

It is difficult to accept the outcome of a non fiction book- I think because you know that all those things really happened and you can't affect or change them. Your thoughts are insightful.